Purpose of the project

[charlieg]

VDrift aims to be a high quality open source racing simulation featuring enjoyable and challenging gameplay. The project strives to take advantage of modern computing hardware to accurately simulate vehicle physics in rich and immersive racing environments. To meet these goals, VDrift maintains an open platform for experimentation to a cooperative community of creative programmers and artists.

You should write 'free/libre' instead of open source.

Several sentences are redundant such as "strives to take advantage of modern computer hardware" - implied by 'high quality' and people can see, from the screenshots, how demanding it is on hardware. You double up on 'aims to' with 'strives to'. I'd remove both since they are stating the obvious (that you are striving / aiming towards your goals).

VDrift is a high quality free/libre racing simulation that is currently in development. Players experience accurately simulated vehicle physics in rich and immersive racing environments. VDrift maintains an open platform for experimentation to a cooperative community of creative programmers and artists.